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Roman, 1st Century Mosaic, Tilings from Historical Sources

Something is bothering me about the book. I’m close to finishing the rewrite, but there’s a flaw in the structure. The story lacks climactic energy. Loose Daddy doesn’t have a climax and doesn’t appear to build to one. Four significant events happen, but the story is missing its turning point. I’m not sure what to do.

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