in the palace of my dreams

Delaneira, Evelyn De Morgan

51,046. Thought I’d write Silk River in present tense, but I’ve changed my mind about that. The voice gave me trouble, the kind of trouble I don’t need, so I’m not going to try a risky method. I’ll make better progress if I don’t have to struggle with the voice. Why drop rocks in my way? Why stub my toe with every step? I’ve switched back to third person subjective, and I revised those first 5 pages into that voice this morning, catching up to the end of the scene. Things flowed much better.


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