45431. Vinza and Annasara had an interesting conversation yesterday. I’m pleased with the 645 words that came. It was nice to listen to their voices; they talked; I wrote, but even so, after I was done, I wondered…does it work? Does it have purpose? What does the reader gain? What does it do for the story? I needn’t worry really, and how well the scene eventually plays depends on what comes before it and what might come after it. Shadows cast from a different light.
This morning I’m going to spend a little time connecting stray dots.