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May 31, 2007

true to character

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 12:50

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Lightning and Light, Albert Moore

56,580. May’s writing goal was 3000 more words; I made it! (Starting count May 1: 53,371). Yay me! This weekend I’ll take a look at things and set June’s objectives. Can someone tell me how to set a Zokutou word count thingy with WordPress? Much appreciate it.

In her post, Bossy Characters or Chained to Plot, Lisa, at http://intrinsiclifedesign.squarespace.com/ discusses that old writing kerfuffle, character versus plot, and asks, “Writers, what’s your preference? How do you write?” This set me to thinking…yep, the pitfall looms.

I love a good well-plotted story, but I love even more fiction where the characters give birth to a rousing plot, where the plot blooms, generates, proliferates from out of the character(s). Characters–they got the best plots in ‘em!

I’m all for bossy characters. I have much wrestling, much go-rounding, with the plotting monster and I always lose until the moment I get a peg on the character and what that character is doing, is gonna do, wants to do. Once my character gets going, then the plot acorn sprouts a sprig or two.

I had something else I wanted to write about here today, but it’s slipped my mind. CRS–again!

May 29, 2007

don’t drop me on the rocks

Filed under: Miscellany, Writing — dayya @ 3:24

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Pomegranates, Albert Moore

Saw PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN:AT WORLD’S END. Enjoyed it, but, imo, there was too much Captain Jack. I love Johnny Depp, but the movie could have done with a bit less Captain Jack. The hallucination scene works fine the first time, but when it’s repeated later, the fragile tissue of the suspension of disbelief tore a little for me. Still it’s rousing good fun and I’m adding it to my movie collection. I like it better than the second one.

THE MERRY WIDOW was a delight, although it was performed in English, I still could not make out what they were singing, but there were speaking parts. The title role was sung by mezzo-soprano Susan Graham, however, my favorite voice of the evening was the crystalline soprano of Elizabeth Norbert-Schulz as Valencienne. The costumes were dazzling, the sets clever and beautiful. I didn’t know where to look first. The opening scene–ladies in black and white gowns from the Edwardian period, each gown distinctively designed (This version of the operetta is set at a later time period than the original.) whirled about the ballroom floor by elegant gentlemen. Thanks to my terrific seat, Orchestra, third row, eleventh chair, I nearly went cross-eyed trying to make sure I saw each and every beautiful gown, especially during the scene at Maxim’s–each dress was a different shade of red, from claret to ruby to burgundy and tones in between. All those arias and colors–felt like I’d fallen through my own private rabbit hole. It was a wonderful evening.

Presently I’m feeling a bit like Captain Jack in Davy Jones’s locker–one of me is working on the secret project; one of me is rewriting Silk River; one of me is writing The Key to Chaos; and a petite me is working on ideas for Bone, Stone, and Blood. Oh yeah, another one of me–the tall skinny one with the beady eyes–is working on the freelance writing objective. Somewhere in the crowd another me is crawling on hands and knees holding the dayjob paycheck in her mouth. There’s a run in her pantyhose.

May 24, 2007

persian carpet

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 11:49

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Flora and the Zephyrs, John William Waterhouse

55,708. 310 words this morning, back to Silk River after a week of distractions–productive distractions, however.  The Key to Chaos got a week of my time and the scene between Aloli and Lazaretia is in good shape, not quite finished but close. I started a secret project that will require a  significant slice of the time pie, and a title popped up for an unwritten and undetermined horror story–Bone, Stone, and Blood. The plot spider has bitten me again.

Three free days! Oh calloo-callay! Saturday I’ll be reading at writer’s group–from The Key to Chaos and Saturday night I’m going to the opera, for the  first time in my life. The Merry Widow, an operetta actually, is at the Los Angeles Music Center,  at the Dorothy Chandler Pavilion. I hear it’s a delight and I sure hope so. Sunday I’m meeting with Janet, and, darn it, I’m still not done with my read-through of her witch novel. Friday night I plan to see Pirates of the Caribbean: At World’s End…so I don’t think I’m going to get any reading done.

Weatherwise, it’s been weeks of overcast, but today the frowning sky lifted, the sun is smiling, and I hope by Saturday, he’s rotflao!

May 20, 2007

laughter and tears

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 10:58

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Riverbank, Maxfield Parrish

A friend whom I’ve known since the late 80s was married yesterday. It was indeed a joyous occasion. My friend and her groom had both been through rough times, and at last, after a long engagement (5 years) were able to marry. The wedding was at the Portofino Hotel and Yacht Club at the Redondo Beach pier. The Bayside Ballroom was transformed into a wedding chapel for the occasion. Chairs in ivory slipcovers and pink organza swags with rose bouquet ties. Pink and white rose petals reposed along the bridal aisle leading to a rose arch made of more pink and white roses. While we waited for the ceremony, through the window behind the rose arch, I watched seagulls wing about the waves.

The bride’s gown was a fantasy, full-skirted white satin overlaid with silk organza embroidered with arabesques of crystal beading, and an ebullient train. Her bouquet, a bouffant of white and pink roses sprinkled with crystals and pearls. The ceremony was lovely and touching; the bride had written the wedding vows and the minister had a sense of humor. More than once we laughed. Having known my friend and what she’d gone through over the years, I, who never cry at weddings, had tears in my eyes. We were all very happy for them.

I had a wonderful time and didn’t get home until nearly two in the morning. After, of course, bouncing about the streets of Redondo Beach, trying to find my way to the freeway. At least when you’re lost at one a.m. there’s not much traffic to contend with.

Earlier in the day I attended another sweet occasion, the annual luncheon put on by the Manhattan Beach Branch of the American Association of University Women. It was my first time going. Four local writers, former journalists, talked about their careers and their books. Sonia Nazario won the 2003 Pulitzer Prize for Feature Writing. Her book, Enrique’s Journey, tells of the odyssey of a Honduran boy who, wanting to be reunited with his mother who’d gone north, crossing illegally into the US, to find work, makes the harrowing, nightmarish journey from his poverty-striken village to Los Angeles. Sonia, who wished to understand, as deeply as possible, the plight of those who make that hellish journey, went down to Central America and retraced Enrique’s journey herself. She spent five years hopping freight trains, riding along with the immigrants, clinging to the top of box cars, braving the torrid heat of the days and freezing cold of the nights, hungry, thirsty, and in serious danger of harm from corrupt cops and the vicious bandits that prey on the children. Enrique himself was beaten many times, nearly to death on one occasion, as he made his way north. Her book, published by Random House, became a national bestseller, and brought to light the plight of Central America’s and Mexico’s poverty orphans. Sitting there, listening to her tell of the heart-breaking cruelties the children endured, and often did not survive, brought tears to my eyes.

Anyway, I could go on, but I’ll just say, we heard Deanne Stillman, who wrote Twentynine Palms, the true story of the savage murder of two young girls by a Marine in the desert town back in 1991. Former journalist Denise Hamilton talked about her career at the Los Angeles Times and how she came to write crime fiction.

The highlight of the afternoon for me was Susan Straight, author of the critically acclaimed Aquaboogie, Blacker Than A Thousand Midnights, and I Been in Sorrow’s Kitchen and Licked Out All the Pots. She won the Gold Medal for Fiction for her fifth novel, Highwire Moon, a National Book Award finalist. Daughter of a Swedish single mom, she grew up in Riverside, CA in a racially diverse neighborhood and is the mother of 3 biracial girls. She draws upon the stories of African Americans living in Southern California, South Carolina, and Oklahoma, to create her fiction.

She was delightful, warm and humorous, straightforward and compassionate. Her latest novel is A Million Nightingales. The novel is set in nineteenth Louisiana and is the story of a slave girl’s journey from captivity to freedom.

I bought books of course, which brings me to another decision–I need a reading day. I’ve got stacks and stacks of books to read and I want to read them! So I’m thinking, should I let Sunday be reading day? Maybe do my 100 words on Silk River so as not to lose momentum, and then fall into a book of my choosing for the rest of the day. Hmmm…I’ll think about it.

May 19, 2007

candle in hand

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 9:32

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The Carpet Merchant, Jean-Leon Gerome

55,387, Silk River, and The Key to Chaos, 6,961. Would do a word meter but have not figured out how to do one on WordPress.

It was a good week. I let Silk River sit while I spent time with The Key to Chaos. The Aloli-Lazaretia scene is going well, and I’m excited about what’s to come. Did the type-in this morning and that’s all I have time for.

Got a full day–two social events to attend. First, “The World of Women Writers” luncheon, presented by the American Association of University Women. It’s the Annual Authors Luncheon. One of this year’s featured writers is Susan Straight, a local writer who lives in Riverside. I’m looking forward to hearing her speak. And after the luncheon, I’ve got a wedding to go to. A friend and former co-worker is getting married. Luckily the luncheon is in Torrance and the wedding is in Redondo Beach–a scant 8 minutes away from the luncheon venue. I was afraid I’d have to pass on the wedding, but it’s scheduled for 4:30 and the luncheon will be well over by then.

May 18, 2007

picturesque and lurid

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 2:56

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The Eruption of Vesuvius, John Martin 

55,387. The title’s a reference to my dreams lately. No work on Silk River this week. Pendrifter’s been silent; I’ve been busy thinking and writing. Yesterday morning had a great session with pen and paper, finally continued that scene between Aloli and Lazaretia Tataneia, her late father’s mistress. Took time to sketch my take on these two women, got myself focused, and the dialogue progressed. I use dialogue to circle in on  characters. Having to think about what one character will say to another during the back and forth in a particular situation forces personality into being, the way geologic pressure forces a diamond into being. My dialogue wasn’t all that–but the stress of thought and visualization, me staring at that blank yellow page, brought Aloli and Lazaretia into focus. Their words introduced me to their personalities and I finally got what Aloli felt about Lazaretia as well as Lazaretia’s perspective. The scene moved. Not finished, but it acquired a directiion. This weekend I’ll type it in and see where I’m at.

Thursday night’s movie was 28 Weeks Later. I’d rented 28 Days Later last year and it frightened me pretty good. I’m not a fan of zombie films; they give me nightmares. So why would I see such a movie? ‘Cause I’m perverse. (But I won’t view any of the Night of the Living Dead movies for love or money.) The suspense in 28 Days Later made me gnaw my fingers and bury my face in the pillow. I watched the sequel with mild interest (although it did manage to make me jump once–so guess my interest wasn’t quite that mild). The movie is not for the faint-hearted. When I got home, I washed my brain out with a viewing of a Mission Impossible (the 1960s series) episode, and had a peaceful sleep and picturesque dreams. (But I know my subconscious; it’s going to get me one of these nights when I least expect it.)

May 15, 2007

grains of sand

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 6:20

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Ariadne in Naxos, George Frederic Watts

55,387. Silk River is going well. I’m pushing to finish the second draft by October 31st but not too hard. I want the flow to remain fluid and not drain away. I’ve got a good store of days in the word bank and can devote a few days to The Key to Chaos. Must get on with Aloli’s visit to her father’s mistress.

Spent Mother’s Day in Moreno Valley, had a wonderful time with Mom, my sisters, both of whom are mothers, and the two dust devils–my nieces. My youngest niece, Naaliya, at 3 years old, has a quick mind. Jump rope is one of her favorite activities, but she’s too small to jump with the overhead swing so her older sister and I swung the rope on the ground for her and she jumped back and forth over it. In the midst of this, she suddenly stopped and headed for the house, “I get my shoes,” she said.

She came back with her white sandals, put them on, fastened them by herself, and was ready to go.

Me, the wise aunty, said, “You got your shoes so you could jump better, huh?”

“No!” she replied in that pert tone of annoyance only a three-year old can do. “Something stuck my foot!”

Aunty stands corrected. And that was Mother’s Day.

Didn’t write anything for Silk River this morning, but that’s okay. I need to think. I also need to think about The Key to Chaos and nuzzle out some grains of sand that’ll generate pearls for the story. I’ve got the 3-act structure in mind for both books. I’ve almost completed Act I of the Silk River rewrite. For The Key to Chaos, Act I is still in the making. Don’t know what the plot point will be. Will have to write my way to it.

I work by a slow accretion of detail and I know when a scene is really finished. There’s still some work to be done on the scene between Jewel and her mother in the kitchen, although I’ve gone over it twice already. It’s a kick when new scenes pop up like sprigs coming through the rough ground of the first draft. Having a completed first draft gives me the giggles. It was hard won and I treasure it almost as much as I treasure the rewrite.

May 10, 2007

spring dawn

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 2:17

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A Stolen Interview, Edmund Blair Leighton

54,825.  I like the early morning hours at this time of year, the seasonal cusp when spring is ripening into summer. The light of the dawning sun barely touches the sky, the trees, the grass, and the air is sweet and cool yet carries the promise of summer’s heat. In fact this week has been summery; temps in the 80s.

 The scene with Rochelle continues and is going well. My goal is 3000 words this month and looks like I’ll make it.

In my daily life, I’ve had a reversal happen. Surprise, surprise. Eight weeks at my new company, and the former company asked me to come back–and I did. I missed my friends  greatly and the new company turned out to be a very poor fit for me (too bad, but it happens). My old company altered my hours to make my drive time more convenient (and it is somewhat) and of course increased the $$$. I’m happy to be back with them. I got a wonderful welcome on Monday, my first day back.  Lots of hugs and smiles all around. Those 8 weeks turned out to be no more than a break!

The writing is going well–I love THE KEY TO CHAOS (well, not that title, but the story’s good!) and can’t wait to see what Aloli and Emeryk do next. The last scene I worked on Aloli visited her father’s mistress. Got to get back to that one!  And SILK RIVER is inching along, 100 words by 100 words. Every day I write is a good day.

May 9, 2007

rolling through

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 7:40

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Psyche, John William Waterhouse

54,474. Good work this morning. Began a new scene with Rochelle. Her storyline needed enhancing so now she’s about to encounter a problem, although it won’t seem like a problem at the start.

May 6, 2007

lies that tell the truth

Filed under: Writing — dayya @ 12:43

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Bacchante, Lord Frederick Leighton

54,010. And holding. Just didn’t get to SILK RIVER yesterday. Yesterday was writing day with Michelle, and after stuffing ourselves with sushi at Todai, we settled at It’s A Grind and I spent all my time on the romantic fantasy, which I’ve tentatively titled THE KEY TO CHAOS. Not a favorite, but it’ll do for a working title. I’ve got 24 pages so far, 6,405 words, and I like the story very much. I only wrote 2-1/2 pages yesterday, but they’re good pages and got me to an important scene. I’m not sure how it’s going to go, but I’m in the middle of it.

Work on SILK RIVER is daily, but THE KEY TO CHAOS is whenever–whenever I get a scene, whenever I hear one character say something to another, whenever something about the story occurs to me. Still I plan to finish both books this year.

It’s sunny today and I’ve got my herb garden in the window drinking in the shine. The thyme and parsley are lovely. The parsley is starting to trefoil–nope, not a verb, but it works. The mint is s-l-o-o-w, but a few sprigs have come up–like four. Don’t know why it’s not keeping up with the thyme and parsley. The alpine strawberry is still fruiting, but a number of its vines died over the past week. Don’t know what’s wrong, but it’s still putting out new foliage and berries.

Today I may work on THE KEY TO CHAOS and let the word bank take care of the 100 words for SILK RIVER. I’m ahead with it so I can devote another day to the romantic fantasy if I want.

Michelle is writing a marvelous story titled THE ORACLE COMES TO JUBILEE, Greek mythology, steampunk, and the Old West. She’s great at combining disparate ideas. I’m expecting this one to find a home as soon as it wings out the door.

Meanwhile I’m still mulling over my short fiction aspirations, but nothing’s happening with JEALOUS WINE or A GEOMETRY OF VAPOR, and no new ideas have bubbled up from the swamp. (sigh)

We went to see SPIDERMAN 3 last night. Enjoyed it. I’m down to the last episode of Season One of the old television series MISSION IMPOSSIBLE. I’ve been skipping around on the dvd’s, and taking my time with the viewing. Don’t know when Season Two will be available and I’m going to be an unhappy camper when I view the last show–so I’m saving it. Also finished the anime WOLF’S RAIN. Loved it–although the ending is a downer. Still, going to add it to my collection, and I’ve got TRINITY BLOOD next on the list to watch.

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